One sunny morning Lucy went to the shop to buy some loom bands because at her school it was a big craze.
As Lucy was strolling quickly to the shops, she saw lots of people with the bracelets on their wrist. When she finally arrived at the shop, she went in and wandered around. She still couldn’t see the packs, but she could see people going out of the shop with them. Then she went to the shopkeeper and asked,
“Do you have any packets of loom bands?”
“Yes but I’m afraid it’s the last one” he replied.
Lucy paid happily and went home to show her friends.
Burrington Primary School Blog 
Hello Elicia,
I wondered how long it would take for the loom band craze to make it’s way into 100wc 🙂 You have chosen a very topical theme for your story this week. Maybe you could have thought about describing how Lucy felt about getting that final pack of loom bands to add some emotion to your story. Your spelling, grammar and punctuation are all very good – well done.
Have a lovely summer holiday and well done for all of your hard work.
Nicki W Team #100wc