At school thinking all was the same, strolling into the classroom I see disaster had struck. I look down at the table I see a test laid in front of me. I was startled scared frightened loads of words coming out of me. I was asked to sit. My tummy was puzzled, my mind jumbling up into a big ball. I didn’t do that well on my last test. I hear my teachers loud voice say one minute left! The swirls in my head all blurted BUT I THOUGHT I HAD ENOUGH TIME!!! . I had not even started.
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Burrington Primary School Blog 
Hi Ernie. I like the idea of there not being enough time during a test. I always make sure that I read back through my writing before I publish it to check for mistakes – you might want to read back through to check for punctuation, as you have either chosen to leave a lot out to create the effect of the jumbled thoughts, or you’ve got carried away with your story and forgotten to put it in! You have used some good vocabulary – strolling, disaster, startled and puzzled.
Well done for entering this week’s 100 word challenge.
Miss Willing – Team 100wc
Huntingdon, England