Deep in the thick undergrowth of the Columbian jungle a lost caveman was trying to survive. Through the day he had been collecting materials to build a shelter to protect him against the vicious night animals. It was coming to the end of the day, only then did the caveman decide to put together his shelter.Watching the caveman was a furious jaguar hiding in the bush. When the sun had fallen and the caveman was still working on his shelter, the jaguar pounced; the caveman fell to the ground in pain. “But I thought I had enough time,” shouted the caveman.
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This is really good writing. The way you put this story together is really mature and I loved phrases like ‘only then did the caveman decide to put together his shelter’. The story flowed beautifully and the prompt was worked in really perfectly. Very well done!
i like the way you said he protected him from the vicious animals